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Shambhu's avatar

Love the idea that their time is "abnormal" implying that there was a time line that was once "normal" - love the concept

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Ajinkya Goyal's avatar

That wasn't actually something I'd thought of but it does present some interesting possibilities

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Amanpreet Chawla's avatar

Love the ending and the derived meaning!

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Ajinkya Goyal's avatar

Thank you!

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Priyanka Sharma's avatar

Crazyyyyyy!!! Loved the quote "If a fire threatened to burn your house down, would you fight against the flames and smoke and emerge victorious, or would you simply lie there, grateful to have felt warmth of any kind for the first time since you could remember?"

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Ajinkya Goyal's avatar

Glad you liked it! :)

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Valiqa Ali's avatar

Excellent writing. I love the ending.

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Ajinkya Goyal's avatar

Thank you! I don't write on Substack anymore, but I can add you to my email list to make sure you don't miss out on stories, if you want.

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Valiqa Ali's avatar

Sure. Thanks

Looking forward to reading more of your stories.

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Ajinkya Goyal's avatar

Thank you! Hope you enjoy.

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