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Rudresh Singh's avatar

Very nice Ajinkya👍

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Ajinkya Goyal's avatar

Thank you!

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Rudresh Singh's avatar

Very nice Ajinkya👍

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Sesh's avatar

Awesome Ajinkya. Not sure if these two characters really exist, but you writing provoked introspection 😊

My morality leads the other two though!

Keep up the writing style. Very proud of you.

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Ajinkya Goyal's avatar

Glad you liked it!

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Nisha sanga's avatar

very well woven story !

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Ajinkya Goyal's avatar

Thank you!

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Elle Griffin's avatar

Very exciting. Looking forward to part two!

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Ajinkya Goyal's avatar

Thanks so much, Elle!

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Shambhu's avatar

Betwixt is such a delicious word and I'm pleased to see it being used, appropriately too for that matter. The characters and the plot is fascinating and I can see scenes developing so clearly...I'd loveee to read more.. It is eerie and exciting at the same time!!!

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Ajinkya Goyal's avatar

Thank you so, so much!

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